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Here are some of our Teddy Bear stories.

There are some lovely websites for children of this age and they can be used to support the children's learning in many different ways.  After reading the stories on www.beartime.com about two teddies called John and El, the Pandas were inspired to have a go at writing their own teddy bear stories.  The focus was to make sure your story had a clear beginning, an exciting middle and a happy ending.  We hope you enjoy them!

If you visit the Beartime site you will be able to read these stories there as well.

Once upon a time a little bear was bouncing on a trampoline.  The little bear fell off.  The ambulance came.  He went to the hospital and he was alright.

by Kitty

Once upon a time it was Christmas and Father Christmas came and gave John and El presents.  A monster got the presents.  They threw the monster out of the world.

By Abbie

 

Once upon a time there was a wizard bear and he went to the fair.  He went on the big wheel.  He fell off.  He fell on a trampoline.

by Ruby

 

One day John and El went through a time portal.  They were in a different world.  They were scared.  They came back.

By Peter

Once upon a time there were two teddy bears.  They went to the zoo.  They saw some elephants.  It squirted them.  The zoo man came with a towel.

By Alice

Once upon a time El had a party.  He didn't have any presents.  Everybody forgot about his party but then his friends remembered and he had ten presents.

By Olivia R.

 

 

On day El went to the zoo.  They saw a lion.  They thought it was going to eat them but it played with them.

By Harris

 

 

Once upon a time John and El went to the zoo and they saw a tiger.  They thought it was going to get them but it was a good tiger.  It shared its tomatoes.  It was good.  They went home.

By Tara

Once upon a time the teddy bears went to the forest.  They saw a deer.  The deer shared his lunch.  They went home.

By William

One day John and El went to the jungle.  They heard a ghost.  The ghost was really an owl.

By Reece

 

 

One day a bear called Billy went to the jungle.  He saw a crocodile.  Billy jumped on a jungle vine.  The crocodile tried to get him.  Billy ran away.  The crocodile gave up.  The crocodile went away.

By Callum M.

 

 

 

Once upon a time a teddy went to school.  They played in the playground.  He went home.

By Lewis

Once it was Christmas.  El wanted presents.  He was sad.  He went home.

By Olivia S.

Once upon a time there was a teddy who went to his friends house and washed his toys.  They were so pleased they gave him a toy.

By Max H.

 

 

Once upon a time John and El went to the seaside and a crab tried to pinch them but then the crab shared his bananas.

By Aaron

 

 

Once John and El went to the swings and they went on a see-saw and El fell off.  They went to the doctors.  They went home.

By Callum S.

Once upon a time a bear went to the park.  It was fun.  They went on the swings.  They fell off.  They went to hospital.  The doctor made him better.

By Lorien

Once upon a time a big, bad teddy tried to eat a little teddy but the little teddy ran away.

By Max E.


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